Question

I need help with my thesis statement for my term paper on Alcatraz. The paper focuses on Alcatraz history, Life on Alcatraz and Famous Prisoners and escapes (10th grade).

I have:

Alcatraz, a federal penitentiary, history of Alcatraz, life on Alcatraz, while Alcatraz was a prison it had a few famous prisoners and escapes.

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Ms. Sue
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