I need to re-write a poem into a free verse, but I'm not very good at poems. This is what I have to re-write:

Question

We saw the months of wicked weather,
As day to painful night did turn,
Waiting, huddled close together
For the frozen sun's return

This is what I have, but I don't know if it's right:
Wicked winds and storms have passed,
The days are cold but the nights are blood freezing,
We huddle on to life and warmth in the cold
Waiting for the warmth and glory the sun brings

Answer 1

Writeacher I reprased it.

Answer 2

Cheater, Cheater, Cheater!!!!!