Asked by ?IDK?

I need to re-write a poem into a free verse, but I'm not very good at poems. This is what I have to re-write:
We saw the months of wicked weather,
As day to painful night did turn,
Waiting, huddled close together
For the frozen sun's return


This is what I have, but I don't know if it's right:
Wicked winds and storms have passed,
The days are cold but the night are blood freezing,
Huddling on to life and warmth in the cold
For the frost on the sun to melt and shine

Answers

Answered by Writeacher
These phrases don't make sense. Be sure to look up every word you're not 100% sure of: http://www.answers.com

<i>the night are

Huddling on to

the frost on the sun</i>
Answered by ?IDK?
Wicked winds and storms have passed,
The days are cold but the nights are blood freezing,
We huddle on to life and warmth in the cold
Waiting for the warmth and glory the sun brings
Answered by Anonymous
....... you go to CCA lol

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