Asked by Kara

Does the wording sound alright in this sentence.

War is the solution to the world's problems because global peace is
impossible to achieve. Nothing is better than having that basic
understanding on how in the end war would be justified and benefits
mankind.
Answered by SraJMcGin
If you were to read this aloud, putting a comma on either side of "in the end" would allow a breath, if that were necessary. At the very end, try a parallel construction = "war would be justified and mankind benefited/benefitted."

Sra
Answered by Kara
Should one of those benefited be benefits?????
Answered by Writeacher
No -- use benefited.
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