Question

Need help re-wording!!!

Women’s reproductive rights is still a political issue our leaders are still arguing over whether or not trans women are women they are, which adds a whole additional layer of prejudice and disinclusion typical sorts of sexism women face, which trans women also face.

Answer 1

Yes, you do.

Please rewrite using appropriate punctuation and capitalization.

Answer 2

Here's a nicer approach to help correcting you rather than criticizing you.


Maybe say:
Women's reproductive rights is a very controversial political issue. Additionally, the argument of whether or not transgender women have these rights is a big debate regardless of the fact that all women, transgender or not, face sexism and discrimination.