Asked by Tierra Mertor


Need help re-wording!!!

Women’s reproductive rights is still a political issue our leaders are still arguing over whether or not trans women are women they are, which adds a whole additional layer of prejudice and disinclusion typical sorts of sexism women face, which trans women also face.

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Answered by Ms. Sue
Yes, you do.

Please rewrite using appropriate punctuation and capitalization.
Answered by Better than Ms. Sue
Here's a nicer approach to help correcting you rather than criticizing you.


Maybe say:
Women's reproductive rights is a very controversial political issue. Additionally, the argument of whether or not transgender women have these rights is a big debate regardless of the fact that all women, transgender or not, face sexism and discrimination.

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