Question

I need help wording a sentence. I don't know what to put in the blank to make it a good sentence and make sure it doesn't change the sentence too much. What should I put there to make it a complete sentence?
"As time went on __________ Lieta being separated from her sister, she began go grow sickly thin and pale."

Answer 1

I accidently put go there. It's supposed to be "to" not "go".

Answer 2

Maybe this?

"While Lieta was separated from her sister, she began to grow sickly thin and pale."

Answer 3

That works. Thank you Writeacher!

Answer 4

You're welcome!