Question

I am writing a poem for class, so is this good?

Love

It can be perfect, it can be cruel, but can be broken by a fool. How can something so craveable, be breakable? One word misheard, one look is all it took, to end love. Love, you thief, you criminal, you crook! Why must you be so overlooked? One glance and you are there, you can pop up anywhere. Everyone wants love, but not for me, No siree! So throw me a bone and leave me alone before I groan!

Answer 1

I like it! Now, write it in poetic form and let's see how the lines come out. As it is, it's more of a prose poem than a traditional poem - which is okay, if that's what you want to create. A traditional poem needs a meter of some sort, indicated by the line breaks.