Question

Revise the following sentence to omit personal pronouns.

I think it is important for you to evaluate information before it in a paper.

It's important to evaluate information before including in your paper.

Please check my work.

Ms. Sue
Your is a personal pronoun.

Please try again.

Tim
It's important for me to evaluate information before including it in the paper.


Please check my work.
Ms. Sue
No!

Me?

This site will help you identify personal pronouns.

http://www.englishclub.com/grammar/pronouns-personal.htm
Tim
It's important to evaluate information, before including it in the paper.

Is this better.
Ms. Sue
Yes. You've got it now.

Just delete the comma.