Question
revise the following sentence to use modifiers correctly, clearly and effectively. *= revised sentence
1.The student cafeteria is operated by a college food service system chain.
* A chain of food service system operates the student cafeteria.
Thank you
1.The student cafeteria is operated by a college food service system chain.
* A chain of food service system operates the student cafeteria.
Thank you
Answers
Reed
You left out the word "college" in your revision. And does the entire chain operate the cafeteria? I did a double-take reading it the way you have written it. Is there a better way?
Reed
I'll check back later this evening to see what you come up with. :) It's dinner time on the west coast where I am.
sis
OK,here is the revision.I think this makes more sense.
The college food service system operates a chain of student cafeteria.
The college food service system operates a chain of student cafeteria.
Ms. Sue
This looks good -- except for the last word.
sis
Ok Thank you.