Asked by sis
                revise the following sentence to use modifiers correctly, clearly and effectively. *= revised sentence
1.The student cafeteria is operated by a college food service system chain.
* A chain of food service system operates the student cafeteria.
Thank you
            
        1.The student cafeteria is operated by a college food service system chain.
* A chain of food service system operates the student cafeteria.
Thank you
Answers
                    Answered by
            Reed
            
    You left out the word "college" in your revision.  And does the entire chain operate the cafeteria?  I did a double-take reading it the way you have written it.  Is there a better way?
    
                    Answered by
            Reed
            
    I'll check back later this evening to see what you come up with.  :)  It's dinner time on the west coast where I am.  
    
                    Answered by
            sis
            
    OK,here is the revision.I think this makes more sense.
 
The college food service system operates a chain of student cafeteria.
    
The college food service system operates a chain of student cafeteria.
                    Answered by
            Ms. Sue
            
    This looks good -- except for the last word.
    
                    Answered by
            sis
            
    Ok Thank you.
    
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