Asked by Tim

Revise the sentence below to make it more formal:

'You're going to get really fat if you eat at fast foods restaurants all the time.

My version:
If you continue eating at fast food restaurants all the time, the possibility of becoming obese will be very high.

Please check my work.
Answered by Writeacher
It's wordy, but it is definitely more formal!
Answered by Tim
How would you rewrite the sentence.
Answered by Writeacher
I'd just write this: You will become obese if you continue eating fast food.
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