Asked by Tim
                Revise the sentence below to make it more formal:
'You're going to get really fat if you eat at fast foods restaurants all the time.
My version:
If you continue eating at fast food restaurants all the time, the possibility of becoming obese will be very high.
Please check my work.
            
        'You're going to get really fat if you eat at fast foods restaurants all the time.
My version:
If you continue eating at fast food restaurants all the time, the possibility of becoming obese will be very high.
Please check my work.
Answers
                    Answered by
            Writeacher
            
    It's wordy, but it is definitely more formal!
    
                    Answered by
            Tim
            
    How would you rewrite the sentence.
    
                    Answered by
            Writeacher
            
    I'd just write this: You will become obese if you continue eating fast food.
    
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