sentence two: symbolisent
sentence three: L'Allemagne
soccer= foot
check case with croire
put commas in last sentence
would someone be able to correct my paper? It's not finished yet, but this is what i have so far:
L’image que j’ai dessiné représente le monde dans façons different. Les drapeux symboliser les pays different artour du monde. La Allemagne, Les Etats- Unis, Canada, La Chine, La France, Le République tchèque et Le République dominicaine sont dans l’image. Je veux à document les frontiers et comme tout le monde est montré de les pays ils viennent. J’ai dessiné un crampons parce que j’aime jouer au soccer! Je voudrais les gens savoir quel j’aimais. J’ai dessiné un signe de paix parce que je crois que ces est paix dans le monde. Aussi, j’ai dessiné les quatre saisons à représente le printemps, l’hiver, l’automme, et l’été. Pendant chaque saison, il y a different types de temps pour exemple dans l’hiver c’est enneigé ou dans l’automne ces sont beaucoup de feuilles.
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Sentence 1 = Have you studied yet "the agreement of the past participle with a preceding direct object? L'image que j'ai dessinée (feminine, just like l'image) and façons is plural = did you want that? either "dans des façons différentes" OR dans une façon différente.
les pays différents (basic in French is that all adjectives have the same number - singular or plural - and gender - masculine or feminine - as the noun(s) modified.
artour = autour (spelling)
les États-Unis / la Tchécoslovaquie / la République
Without the English of what you intend to say, I make no sense of this sentence:
Je veux à document les frontiers et comme tout le monde est montré de les pays ils viennent. Please rework it or let me know what you thought you were saying & de + les = des
un crampon is a cleat or a clamp and I doubt you meant that?
Have you had the Subjunctive? "Je voudrais les gens savoir quel" might mean "I would the people to know what I used to like? (or do like = j'aime) = Je voudrais que les gens sachent ce que j'aime.
"ces est paix dans le monde. " = first "ces" is an adjective, not a noun or pronoun. = Again, please give me the English of what you are trying to say.
Memorize this "after a preposition, the ONLY form of the verb that follows is the infinitive" = à représenter
"different types de temps pour exemple " is either "des types différents, par exemple"
in the winter = en hiver il est neigeux (it is snowy?) ou en automne il y a beaucoup de feuilles.
Do you have a good dictionary? If not, invest in a good one OR there are dictionaries online we can give you. (French to English/English to French) Use a dictionary to check spelling, idioms, gender, etc.
And, don't forget Millie's suggestions.
Then, if you have time, repost for final proofreading. When you aren't sure how to say something (and don't write it in English FIRST), SIMPLIFY. Always use the expressions you have learned if possible.
Sra (aka Mme)
les pays différents (basic in French is that all adjectives have the same number - singular or plural - and gender - masculine or feminine - as the noun(s) modified.
artour = autour (spelling)
les États-Unis / la Tchécoslovaquie / la République
Without the English of what you intend to say, I make no sense of this sentence:
Je veux à document les frontiers et comme tout le monde est montré de les pays ils viennent. Please rework it or let me know what you thought you were saying & de + les = des
un crampon is a cleat or a clamp and I doubt you meant that?
Have you had the Subjunctive? "Je voudrais les gens savoir quel" might mean "I would the people to know what I used to like? (or do like = j'aime) = Je voudrais que les gens sachent ce que j'aime.
"ces est paix dans le monde. " = first "ces" is an adjective, not a noun or pronoun. = Again, please give me the English of what you are trying to say.
Memorize this "after a preposition, the ONLY form of the verb that follows is the infinitive" = à représenter
"different types de temps pour exemple " is either "des types différents, par exemple"
in the winter = en hiver il est neigeux (it is snowy?) ou en automne il y a beaucoup de feuilles.
Do you have a good dictionary? If not, invest in a good one OR there are dictionaries online we can give you. (French to English/English to French) Use a dictionary to check spelling, idioms, gender, etc.
And, don't forget Millie's suggestions.
Then, if you have time, repost for final proofreading. When you aren't sure how to say something (and don't write it in English FIRST), SIMPLIFY. Always use the expressions you have learned if possible.
Sra (aka Mme)
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