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replace “smile” with “Mona Lisa smile”
replace “smile” with “Mona Lisa smile”
add “in a million years” after “Try as I might, I couldn’t figure out”
add “in a million years” after “Try as I might, I couldn’t figure out”
replace “Try as I might, I couldn’t figure out” with “Even with the skills of Sherlock himself, I couldn’t have figured out”
replace “Try as I might, I couldn’t figure out” with “Even with the skills of Sherlock himself, I couldn’t have figured out”
add “like a mysterious old song” after “smile
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The best revision to introduce an allusion and make the description more vivid is:
replace “smile” with “Mona Lisa smile”
This revision utilizes an allusion to the famous painting by Leonardo da Vinci, which is known for its enigmatic smile, thus enhancing the imagery and depth of the description.
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