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replace “Try as I might, I couldn’t figure out” with “Even with the skills of Sherlock himself, I couldn’t have figured out”
replace “Try as I might, I couldn’t figure out” with “Even with the skills of Sherlock himself, I couldn’t have figured out”
add “like a mysterious old song” after “smile”
add “like a mysterious old song” after “smile”
replace “smile” with “Mona Lisa smile”
replace “smile” with “Mona Lisa smile”
add “in a million years” after “Try as I might, I couldn’t figure out
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The best revision that introduces an allusion to make the description more vivid is:
replace “smile” with “Mona Lisa smile”
This reference to the iconic painting by Leonardo da Vinci alludes to a mysterious and enigmatic quality, enhancing the vividness of the description.
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