Question

Which of the following options best demonstrates sentence fluency?
A. The city looked beautiful in that it was lit by the sun which I was walking down the street.
B. Walking down the street in the sunshine, the city looked beautiful.
C. The city looked beautiful as I was walking, lit by the sun, down the street.
D. Walking down the street, I noticed how beautiful the city looked in the sunshine.

I'm stuck between A & D.... Think D

Answer 1

D is correct.

Answer 2

Thanks!

Answer 3

You're welcome.