Question

Which of the following options best demonstrates sentence fluency?
a. The city looked beautiful in that it was lit by the sun while I was walking down the street.
b. Walking down the street in the sunshine, the city looked beautiful.
c. The city looked beautiful as I was walking, lit by the sun, down the street.
d. Walking down the street, I noticed how beautiful the city looked in the sunshine.

Answer is C???

Answer 1

Not C.

Answer 2

Ask yourself which one makes sense ...

1. Did the sun light up the city while you were walking ... ?
2. Was the city "walking down the street"?
3. Was your walking "lit by the sun, down the street"?
4. Was "I" walking down the street ... ?

Answer 3

I am not sure