Question

Which of the following options best demonstrates sentence fluency?
d. Walking down the street, I noticed how terrible the town looked among all the trash.
b. The town looked terrible in that it was trashed by the tourists while I was walking down the street.
c. The town looked terrible as I was walking, trashed by the tourists, down the street.
d. Walking down the street in all the trash, the town looked terrible.

D ?

Answer 1

my bad. I mean A. Walking down the street, I noticed how terrible the town looked among all the trash.

Answer 2

i choose A

Answer 3

Yes. A is right.