We have to write a poem, but I am not great at writing, so how does this sound?

Question

Love

It can be perfect,
it can be cruel,
but can be broken by a fool.
How can something so craveable,
be breakable?
One word misheard,
one look is all it took,
to make the love disappear.
Love,
you thief,
you criminal,
you crook!
Why must you be so overlooked?
One glance and you are there,
you can pop up anywhere.
Everyone seems to want love,
but not me, so leave me be!

Answer 1

I still like it. I'd make "Love, you thief...crook" all one line. Your rhyme scheme works with "crook" and "overlooked". It's really quite good. I hope your teacher agrees. :) I can't know his/her expectations.