The two revisions that would make the sentence more precise are:
- replace “took a look at” with “read”
- replace “employee” with “editor”
These changes enhance clarity and specificity regarding the actions performed and the roles involved.
Use the sentence to answer the question.
The employee took a look at the writer’s work and agreed to edit the text.
Which revisions would make the sentence more precise? Select the two correct answers.
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Responses
replace “edit” with “work on”
replace “edit” with “work on”
replace “agreed” with “consented”
replace “agreed” with “consented”
replace “took a look at” with “read”
replace “took a look at” with “read”
replace “employee” with “editor”
replace “employee” with “editor”
replace “text” with “manuscript”
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