The two revisions that would make the sentence more precise are:
- Replace “employee” with “editor.”
- Replace “text” with “manuscript.”
These changes provide a clearer understanding of the roles and context involved in the situation described.
Use the sentence to answer the question. The employee took a look at the writer’s work and agreed to edit the text. Which revisions would make the sentence more precise? Select the two correct answers. (1 point) Responses replace “employee” with “editor” replace “employee” with “editor” replace “took a look at” with “read” replace “took a look at” with “read” replace “text” with “manuscript” replace “text” with “manuscript” replace “edit” with “work on” replace “edit” with “work on” replace “agreed” with “consented”
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The two revisions that would make the sentence more precise are:
These changes provide a clearer understanding of the roles and context involved in the situation described.