The two revisions that would make the sentence more precise are:
- replace “employee” with “editor”
- replace “took a look at” with “read”
The employee took a look at the writer’s work and agreed to edit the text.
Which revisions would make the sentence more precise? Select the two correct answers.
(1 point)
Responses
replace “text” with “manuscript”
replace “text” with “manuscript”
replace “employee” with “editor”
replace “employee” with “editor”
replace “edit” with “work on”
replace “edit” with “work on”
replace “agreed” with “consented”
replace “agreed” with “consented”
replace “took a look at” with “read”
1 answer
The two revisions that would make the sentence more precise are: