Use the sentence to answer the question.

Question

"Kayla writes the following claim: I think school should only be four days a week."

In one to two sentences, determine why this claim needs to be revised. Then, write a claim about the topic that you could support with reasons in an argumentative essay.

(2 points)

Answer 1

This claim needs to be revised because it does not provide any reasons to support the idea that school should only be four days a week. A revised claim could be: "School should only be four days a week because it would give students more time to pursue their interests, reduce stress, and allow teachers to have more time to plan engaging lessons."