The claim needs to be revised because it is solely based on the writer's personal opinion without providing any supporting reasons or evidence.
Claim: Implementing a four-day school week can improve student attendance, reduce transportation costs, and enhance student academic performance.
Use the sentence to answer the question.
"Kayla writes the following claim: I think school should only be four days a week"
In one short sentence, explain why this claim needs to be revised. Then, write a claim about the topic that you could support with reasons in an argumentative essay
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