Question

Question

Use the sentence to answer the question.

"Kayla writes the following claim: I think school should only be four days a week."

In one to two sentences, determine why this claim needs to be revised. Then, write a claim about the topic that you could support with reasons in an argumentative essay

Answer 1

This claim needs to be revised because it doesn't provide any reasoning or evidence to support the idea of having school only four days a week. A revised claim could be: "Reducing the number of school days to four per week would improve student well-being by allowing for more rest and free time, leading to increased focus and productivity in the classroom."