The correct response for making the text have a more formal style would be to:
Revise to avoid first person pronouns.
This change would help formalize the writing by making it less personal and more objective.
Use the claim to answer the question.
Claim: During summer vacation, I take a walk every day after lunch. The air is refreshing and helps me prepare for the rest of the day. I also love taking a few minutes to break up the day. I can’t imagine going without my lunchtime walk! During the school year, students should be able to take a walk outside every day after lunch.
What change should the writer make if they want the text to have a more formal style?
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Responses
Revise to avoid first person pronouns.
Revise to avoid first person pronouns.
Replace the word walk with the phrase daily jaunt.
Replace the word walk with the phrase daily jaunt.
Remove the unsupported claim about fresh air being refreshing.
Remove the unsupported claim about fresh air being refreshing.
Add a sentence with statistics about walks.
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