Use the claim to answer the question.

Question

Claim: During summer vacation, I take a walk every day after lunch. The air is refreshing and helps me prepare for the rest of the day. I also love taking a few minutes to break up the day. I can’t imagine going without my lunchtime walk! During the school year, students should be able to take a walk outside every day after lunch.
What change should the writer make if they want the text to have a more formal style?

(1 point)
Responses

Add a sentence with statistics about walks.
Add a sentence with statistics about walks.

Revise to avoid first person pronouns.
Revise to avoid first person pronouns.

Replace the word walk with the phrase daily jaunt.
Replace the word walk with the phrase daily jaunt.

Remove the unsupported claim about fresh air being refreshing.

Answer 1

Revise to avoid first person pronouns.