The change the writer should make to achieve a more formal style is to:
Revise to avoid first person pronouns.
This would help shift the tone to a more objective and formal perspective.
Use the claim to answer the question.
Claim: During summer vacation, I take a walk every day after lunch. The air is refreshing and helps me prepare for the rest of the day. I also love taking a few minutes to break up the day. I can’t imagine going without my lunchtime walk! During the school year, students should be able to take a walk outside every day after lunch.
What change should the writer make if they want the text to have a more formal style?
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Add a sentence with statistics about walks.
Add a sentence with statistics about walks.
Revise to avoid first person pronouns.
Revise to avoid first person pronouns.
Remove the unsupported claim about fresh air being refreshing.
Remove the unsupported claim about fresh air being refreshing.
Replace the word walk with the phrase daily jaunt.
Replace the word walk with the phrase daily jaunt.
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