POEM

Question

HI, can you check my poem suppose to be simile.
WHO AM I

A large black nose
as dark as the night
Two round eyes
as big as the moon
two fuzzy ears
as soft as feathers
she`s as friendly
as a newborn baby pup
she`s courageous
as a lion
I love her as sweet as candy

Answer 1

You can also use "like"
Example. Two round eyes like the moon. or Fuzzy ears like feathers.

Now is this a newborn pup... if so, then she can't be like a new born pup.

It would work better to say,
Although courageous as a lion,
she is as sweet as candy.
and I love her.