This does not make sense: "It is able to be appreciating that how" -- there are far too many words here that say nothing really. In addition, it's not clear what you ARE trying to say.
"Pseudolus" is one person (character), right? It's considered singular -- therefore, you need the singular form of the verb that goes with it: "completes."
I don't see that you have tried to make any improvements since you posted this yesterday:
http://www.jiskha.com/display.cgi?id=1283384259
Ms. Sue completely corrected your first paragraph; now it's your turn to work on that second paragraph. Please re-post when you have made a good effort at correcting it.
It is able to be appreciating that how Pseudolus complete all the tasks by his intelligence. I think being a slave, no one can dare to compete other powerful and wealthy authorities. But he does .He wins the bet with Simo and he also gets the girl .As well as about the Ballio and Callidorus, it is good example that power and wealth have a potential to be corrupt and power can’t get succeeds all the time .It is the intelligence which can defeat the powerful man too, like the pseudolus did.
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i try to correct it .
It must be appreciated how Pseudolus completes all the tasks by his intelligence. I think being a slave, no one can dare to compete and fight with powerful and wealthy authorities. But he did .He wins the bet with Simo and he also gets the girl. In this play, Ballio and Callidorus are good example that power and wealth have potential to be corrupt and power can’t be succeeds all the time .It is the intelligence which can defeat the powerful man too, just as pseudolus did.
This isn't clear. Are you referring to slaves in general or to Pseudolus in particular?
"I think being a slave, no one can dare to compete and fight with powerful and wealthy authorities."
This should not be a separate sentence:
"But he did." (<~~Notice that the period comes immediately after the last lstter, not a space away.)
"Ballio and Callidorus" = 2, plural
"example" = 1, singular
How will you fix this?
Start a new sentence after "corrupt." Rephrase the rest so it makes sense.
Watch where you put punctuation. Commas and periods belong immediately after the word where they appear, not a space away.
"I think being a slave, no one can dare to compete and fight with powerful and wealthy authorities."
This should not be a separate sentence:
"But he did." (<~~Notice that the period comes immediately after the last lstter, not a space away.)
"Ballio and Callidorus" = 2, plural
"example" = 1, singular
How will you fix this?
Start a new sentence after "corrupt." Rephrase the rest so it makes sense.
Watch where you put punctuation. Commas and periods belong immediately after the word where they appear, not a space away.
Thanks
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