How would you correct this sentence?

In many companys everyone, including the President, takes their turn at making coffee.

3 answers

Wouldnt the P in president be lower cased? :D

... and how 'bout the "companys" ;D
Thank you for using the Jiskha Homework Help forum. "In many companies everyone, including the President, takes a (his/her) turn at making coffee. Everyone is a collective noun and therefore singular. The plural of company is companies.
The "p" in "president" is usually lower case unless you're also including a president's name:

~~the president of the country

~~President Ronald Reagan