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Question

I am from Iran and now teach English, tell me whether I wrote the following sentence: "When you out in the public, do little things that put her in the mindset for what will happen later."

8-) Thanks in advance. Ilias.

Answer 1

You need a verb at the beginning: "When you are out in public, do little things that put her in the mindset for what will happen later." Also, I deleted "the" in front of "public" to make it less awkward.

Sra

Answer 2

"When you are out in public,.....leave out "the" before public.

However, in Iran I don't believe that you will want to use that sentence in teaching a class. I don't believe that in the US that would be a good sentence either.