Dear Admissions Committee,

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I am writing to formally request re-admission to the University of Goroka, School of Science and Technology, Environmental Science Program after my period of exclusion. I understand the circumstances that led to my exclusion and take full responsibility for my previous academic performance. I am committed to making meaningful changes and believe that I can contribute positively to the school environment if granted the opportunity to return.
During my time away from school, I have taken the opportunity to reflect on my past shortcomings and the factors that contributed to my academic difficulties. The main reasons for my exclusion were my struggles in the advanced chemistry course, CHE 431, and the Biology Course, B1335. In the case of CHE 431, I did not take chemistry courses in Years 2 and 3, which impacted my ability to grasp the concepts and pass the course. Additionally, the lack of guidance from course advisors to take extra chemistry courses in previous years further hindered my understanding of the material.
In the case of B1335, I registered for the course three weeks late because I initially signed up for Biotechnology and attend class. However, I was later assigned to BI 335, which caused me to fall behind on the lectures and ultimately led to my failure in that course. I am eager to learn from my past mistakes and am willing to put in the necessary effort to improve my academic performance. I hope that you will take into consideration the challenges I faced and the genuine effort I am willing to put forth in order to rectify my grades.
Thank you for your time and understanding.
Sincerely,
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Answer 1

Dear Admissions Committee,

I am writing to request re-admission to the University of Goroka, School of Science and Technology, in the Environmental Science Program after my period of exclusion. I understand the reasons for my exclusion and take full responsibility for my past academic performance. I am committed to making meaningful changes and believe that I can contribute positively to the school environment if given the chance to return.

During my time away from school, I have reflected on my past mistakes and the factors that affected my academic difficulties. The main reasons for my exclusion were my struggles in the advanced chemistry course, CHE 431, and the biology course, B1335. For CHE 431, I did not take chemistry courses in Years 2 and 3, which made it hard for me to understand the concepts and pass the course. Additionally, I did not get enough guidance from course advisors about taking extra chemistry courses in previous years, which hurt my understanding of the subject.

For B1335, I signed up for the course three weeks late because I first enrolled in Biotechnology and attended that class. Later, I was assigned to BI 335, which caused me to fall behind on the lectures and ultimately led to my failure in that course. I am eager to learn from my past mistakes and am willing to put in the effort needed to improve my academic performance. I hope you will consider the challenges I faced and the genuine effort I am ready to make in order to improve my grades.

Thank you for your time and understanding.

Sincerely,
[Your Name]