can you please help me make my three senences advanced. im talking about two ways of becoming rich really fast if yourfrom a middle class family. im writing these senetnces for an essay on the book, "the great gatsby."

Question

There are two ways of getting wealthy really quick; the legal way and the illegal way.
The former way of getting rich is through an invention like Bill Gate’s Microsoft discovery or the show business industry like P Diddy’s singing career. The latter way of becoming rich very quickly is by performing gangster business like Gatsby.

thank you!

Answer 1

The two ways of getting wealthy quickly are the legal and the illegal way.

The former way is through an invention like Bill Gate's Microsoft or in the show business industry like P Diddy 's singing career.

The latter way of becoming rich quickily is by being a gangster like Gatsby.

Sra