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can you please improve these two sentences. im tryingtosay like the newly rich try to act as if their high class but they don't get accepted even if they have money. the majordiffference between the ric and the high class, is manner. here is my sentence:...

can you please help me make these sentences better. i was just saying that p diddy and jay gatsby form the the book th great gastby are related because they both lose their father at a young age and are exposed to the scoity around them. P Diddy relates t...

can you please help me make my three senences advanced. im talking about two ways of becoming rich really fast if yourfrom a middle class family. im writing these senetnces for an essay on the book, "the great gatsby." There are two ways of getting wealth...

can you please tell me if these sentences make sense. im talking aboout the book the great gatsby. Change is inevitable to time, however, majority of us deny it. If we lose something in the past that we have admired, we sometimes in future try to replicat...

can you please tell me my snetences make sense. this is about the great gatsby. Gatsby tries to reunite with Daisy, expecting their relationship to sustain with the same compassion, affection, and love as before. However, he realizes that Daisy is now mar...

can you please correct this. i compared michael jackson's life to gatsbys from the novel the great gatsby. when i read this out loud it sounded i think it didn't have that contining fluency. please help me make it more fluent! Michael Jackson and Gatsby a...

i tried my best to coorrect this, but it still sounds wierd. the following paragraph is about the great gatsby, and how many celebrities relate to Gatsby.c can you please suggest ideas and help me make it sound more fluent. thanks!!! P Diddy, Bill Gates,...

can you please help me make this paragraph sound a little bit better. thanks!!!im taking about how power from fame and wealth make celebrites think like thir god. this eventually distrys them, or their carrer. Celebrities are viewed top priority in today’...

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umm... this paragraph is just one portion of my term paper. my paper talks aout different themes that relate to society today. one of those paragraphs which is this talks about why some celebrities are interested in jay gatsby. so im basically comparing t...

writeacher i don't getwhat you mean. Can you please proofread it and show me how to fix me my writing?

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banding is like when you tag the bird right... so it that like mark-recapture method of getting the population