3) the two naturs of the human soul
5) he drank the potion.
The things in parentheses are OK.
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Can you please check these sentences on Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde? Thank you.
1) In Chapter ten Dr. Jekyll came to the realization of the primitive duality of man (the human soul?). He admitted that man was not truly one but two.
2) He was sure that if he could separate his two identities, he would be able to enjoy both lives without guilt or shame.
3) Well before his scientific discoveries he had daydreamt of separating the two natures of human soul, one wholly good and one wholly bad, by housing them in separate identities.
4) For this purpose (?) he used a particular salt, and added it to other components and watched them boil.
5)Finally, when the ebullition had subsided, he drank off the potion. After drinking it, he suffered horrible agonies: the most racking pangs, a grinding in the bones, deadly nausea and a horror in the spirit.
6)When these agonies began to subside,he came to himself as if out of a great sickness.
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3) Well before his scientific discoveries, he had daydreamed of separating the two natures of human soul, one wholly good and one wholly bad, by housing them in separate identities.
Note the comma added and the spelling corrected.
Note the comma added and the spelling corrected.