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can someone help edit this? I literally need this in by tonight
Dear Admissions,
As I was recently speaking with an admissions officer from Uconn, I was exponentially pleased to be informed that the University of Connecticut has allowed for the submition of a writing supplement along with applications. I hae therfire taken this opportunity to briefly show the main experiences that I have encountered the past 4 years, from my point of view, and their direct affects on my grades earlier in my high school career.
With that said, I believe that it is essential that you are aware that I wrote this supplement not with the intentions of evoking sympathy for me, but rather empathy with me. You see, there is no true way in which I can put you in my shoes. There is no way in which I can miraculously have you feel what I have felt and see what I have seen, just as there is no way to reverse time and redo my past. Thus, I have constituted this supplement with the intention of having you understand the stories behind my transcript and how I have come to positively change because of them, as well as to give you a better understanding as to who I am. It is my best effort to having you see what I see, as I hope you come to see that I would, undoubtedly, be a beneficial asset to the University of Connecticut.
Dear Admissions,
As I was recently speaking with an admissions officer from Uconn, I was exponentially pleased to be informed that the University of Connecticut has allowed for the submition of a writing supplement along with applications. I hae therfire taken this opportunity to briefly show the main experiences that I have encountered the past 4 years, from my point of view, and their direct affects on my grades earlier in my high school career.
With that said, I believe that it is essential that you are aware that I wrote this supplement not with the intentions of evoking sympathy for me, but rather empathy with me. You see, there is no true way in which I can put you in my shoes. There is no way in which I can miraculously have you feel what I have felt and see what I have seen, just as there is no way to reverse time and redo my past. Thus, I have constituted this supplement with the intention of having you understand the stories behind my transcript and how I have come to positively change because of them, as well as to give you a better understanding as to who I am. It is my best effort to having you see what I see, as I hope you come to see that I would, undoubtedly, be a beneficial asset to the University of Connecticut.
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