" An ATTEMPT to healthy living can cause misery. How true is this"
Are these arguments good/fair enough ??
against :
a) attempting to live a healthy lifestyle means involvement in sports and outdoor activities, yoga classes, gym bla bla bla. these help one remain fit and also develops mental toughness. thus, trying to lead a healthy life is not causing sadness, but meliorating a person s overall health. bla bla bla.. this is my 1st argument
c) then eating healthy and staying away from junks is another way of trying to live a healthy life. When this happens, people fall less ill . their physical and mental health gets stronger. some amount of money is saved because of less visits to the doctor and less expenditure on medicine. overall , health is improved. they also become mentally sound because no tension about financial crisis and stuff .. this is certainly not a misery "
d) FOR :
something along the lines of : Some people will find it difficult to afford all the things needed to live a healthy life. this includes monthly gym membership fee, organic vegetables ( more expensive ) .. some people who are already poor will face further financial crisis and this can be a cause of misery
4 answers
Your usage of words is clumsy. For example, we don't usually say "junks", we say "junk food". Be careful.