How you start an introduction depends partly on your purpose and your audience. Many teachers recommend starting the introduction with a sentence that "grabs" the reader. Make it interesting so that the reader will want to read more. Sometimes an intriguing question makes a good beginning.
The conclusion should sum up the arguments you used to support your thesis statement.
If you post your introduction and conclusion, we'll be happy to comment on them.
I would like to know how you all start of intro. and conclusion ideas to papers so I can get some ideas that are different from how I write mine.
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Here are a number of good sites on Introductions and Conclusions.
http://members.tripod.com/~lklivingston/essay/intro.html
http://owl.english.purdue.edu/workshops/hypertext/ResearchW/writeintro.html
http://members.tripod.com/~lklivingston/essay/intro.html
http://www.gmu.edu/departments/writingcenter/handouts/introcon.html
http://www.fas.harvard.edu/~wricntr/documents/Conclusions.html
http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/conclude.html
http://members.tripod.com/~lklivingston/essay/intro.html
http://owl.english.purdue.edu/workshops/hypertext/ResearchW/writeintro.html
http://members.tripod.com/~lklivingston/essay/intro.html
http://www.gmu.edu/departments/writingcenter/handouts/introcon.html
http://www.fas.harvard.edu/~wricntr/documents/Conclusions.html
http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/conclude.html