Question
Ice cream/Melts because of hot temperature dripping down In a cone
How can i write this in a poem?
How can i write this in a poem?
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please help me!!
I have no idea how to do this please if you guys could help me out i would be really happy :-D
Writeacher
Ice cream
Melts
because of
hot temperature
dripping down
In a cone
Melts
because of
hot temperature
dripping down
In a cone
NIKE
Can you clarify what you have to do?
NIKE
OK
yes writeacher is right
yes writeacher is right
please help me!!
Example:
sky/rages because the clouds boil in a livid eruption strangling the rainbow
Poem:
As the sky rages,
The clouds boil over onto a sunless sky
Their roiling disturbs the universe.
They erupt with livid colors
Melting into the stars
And strangling the rainbow.
sky/rages because the clouds boil in a livid eruption strangling the rainbow
Poem:
As the sky rages,
The clouds boil over onto a sunless sky
Their roiling disturbs the universe.
They erupt with livid colors
Melting into the stars
And strangling the rainbow.
NIKE
Ohhh you have to put other words in it
please help me!!
yes exactly
NIKE
ice cream
melts from the sun's heat
ohhh man this is hard
melts from the sun's heat
ohhh man this is hard
please help me!!
I got this so far but i don't think it's right.Can you guys fix it
As the Ice cream melts,
The temperature on a sunny summer begins to rise
and disturbs the people.
It dripps down like butter.
The gravity force pulls it down
and all is left is a crunchy cone
As the Ice cream melts,
The temperature on a sunny summer begins to rise
and disturbs the people.
It dripps down like butter.
The gravity force pulls it down
and all is left is a crunchy cone
NIKE
that is perfect i would have never thought of that
please help me!!
Do you think so? I think something its missing but i don't know
NIKE
maybe you should say a cruncy ice cream cone instead of cruncy cone
please help me!!
ok great any other ideas?
NIKE
the gravity makes it drip down in a cone
please help me!!
thanks!! I will see what else can i do...
Morgan
Sorry if I'm too late but when you say you are left with a crunchy cone you should change it to soggy because once the ice cream starts to melt your cone becomes soggy.