Asked by John
                I also bought a timer. After I turn thes witch to the right, clockwise, if I put the point on the switch to the time, it will ring after the time. We don't need a battery in this product, for it has a mechinacal spring. It is useful when you cook instant noodles over a stove. You are apt to forget the food over a stove. So use this timer, and you cannot burn your food.
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I wrote a passage about the product I bought on-line. Would you check the expressions and correct any errors, please?
            
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I wrote a passage about the product I bought on-line. Would you check the expressions and correct any errors, please?
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                    Answered by
            Sarah
            
    "thes witch" is probably supposed to be "the switch",right?
    
                    Answered by
            Writeacher
            
    I also bought a timer. After I turn <b>the switch</b> to the right, clockwise, <b>I set the point on the switch to the time, and it will ring after the set number of minutes</b>. <b>This product doesn't need a battery</b>, for it has a <b>mechanical</b> spring. It is useful when you cook instant noodles <b>on</b> a stove. <b>If you are apt to forget the food as it is cooking,</b> use this timer, and you cannot burn your food. 
I hope that helps -- there was too much repetition of the word "time" in places.
    
I hope that helps -- there was too much repetition of the word "time" in places.
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