Asked by amber
Can you fix this sentence? "When the movie Star Wars premiered in 1977, it was both surprising and a revolution in its special effects."
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Answered by
SraJMcGin
"When the movie Star Wars premiered in 1977, its special effects were both surprising and a revolution.
Sra
Sra
Answered by
Writeacher
"When the movie Star Wars premiered in 1977, it was <u>both surprising and a revolution</u> in its special effects."
I've underlined the part that needs fixing. Sra's revision just needs one little tweak -- you need to find an adjective form of "revolution" to go with the adjective "surprising" -- in other words, you need to adjectives, not an adjective and a noun, in order to make this sentence have parallel construction.
I've underlined the part that needs fixing. Sra's revision just needs one little tweak -- you need to find an adjective form of "revolution" to go with the adjective "surprising" -- in other words, you need to adjectives, not an adjective and a noun, in order to make this sentence have parallel construction.
Answered by
sramcgin
thats wrong
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