Asked by jean
I need the following sentence to be one sentence. Does this sentence flow okay and is punctuation correct? Is there a better way to word the following sentence? I am applying for the position of office manager of surgical services at Barnes Hospital that appeared in the Nursing News last Wednesday since broading by education in medical billing and coding; in addition, this job opportunity will allow me to demonstrate my confidence as a result of my last office manager position in a doctor's office.
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SraJMcGin
This part does not make sense to me:
since broading by education in medical billing and coding
Perhaps instead of "confidence" you might like "proficiency?"
Do y ou think "office manager of surgical services" should be capitalized?
Try it all again? Simplify and just state clearly what you wish to say.
Sra
since broading by education in medical billing and coding
Perhaps instead of "confidence" you might like "proficiency?"
Do y ou think "office manager of surgical services" should be capitalized?
Try it all again? Simplify and just state clearly what you wish to say.
Sra
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