Question

Could you please revise these sentences, too? Thank you.

1)Advertising has also a fundamental role on (?) the way we dress. If I were (was?) invited to a New Year’s party, I would wear a long grey long-sleeved shirt over a pair of black leggings and a belt over (??) it.
2)I don’t follow a particular clothing style. I like wearing in a strange way.
Is it wrong to say "In how many films did he act?"
3) I love old-fashioned clothes and I often wear clothes from the seventies (how can I turn it into an adjective?).
4) Today I have a Led Zeppelin’s black jumper on. Under it I’m wearing a t-shirt with Jerusalem on it. I’ve also a pair of jeans and black shoes on.
5) I love rings and I have one on (?) my right ring finger. I’m also wearing a blue cotton scarf, that is my mum’s present. (better: which is a present from my mum)
6) Once the way we dressed wasn’t very complicated. Television and magazines teach (?) us how to dress ourselves .
7) I’m wearing a blue long-sleeved dress over a pair of black leggings and a pair of black boots. I’m a sport person (better: I’m a sporty person, I’m a sports fan).
8) I like wearing colorful patterned t-shirts. I’m wearing a polo-neck black (or: a black polo-neck?) t-shirt. I have a pair of two-color lace –up trainers. Finally, I’m wearing wrist bands (some wrist bands) and a necklace.

Answer 1

1) Advertising also has a fundamental influence on the way we dress. If I were invited to a New Year’s party, I would wear a grey, long-sleeved, belted tunic over a pair of black leggings.

2) I don’t follow a particular clothing style. I like dressing in a strange way.

Is it wrong to say "In how many films did he act?" <b>No, it's not wrong, but it's not everyday language. It's more usual to say, "How many films was he in?"</b>

3) I love old-fashioned clothes and I often wear '70s clothes.

4) Today I have a Led Zeppelin black jumper on. Under it I’m wearing a t-shirt with Jerusalem on it, as well as a pair of jeans and black shoes.

5) I love rings and I have one on my right ring finger. I’m also wearing a blue cotton scarf that was a gift from my mum.

6) Once, the way we dressed wasn’t very complicated. Television and magazines teach us what we like to wear.

7) I’m wearing a blue long-sleeved dress over a pair of black leggings and a pair of black boots. I’m a sports fan.

8) I like wearing colorfully patterned t-shirts. I’m wearing a black polo shirt. I have a pair of two-color lace–up trainers. Finally, I’m wearing some wrist bands and a necklace.