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I has to revise the following sentence

naomi winned, why d you leave me like this! naomi soon began to cry.naomi lucas yelled Its okay youwill be just fine
17 years ago

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Ms. Sue
Naomi whined, "Why did you leave me like this?"
Naomi soon began to cry.
"Naomi," Lucas yelled, "it's okay. You will be just fine."
17 years ago
Roseliandystarajestarahjaesracritreah
Thank you very much. That should help me on my english homework.
17 years ago
Ms. Sue
You're welcome.
17 years ago

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