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What is the best way to revise this sentence " Make your decisions about what features are important to you."

A. Make decisions about what features are important to you.
C. Decide what features are important to you.
14 years ago

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Writeacher
C seems closer to the meaning of the original.
14 years ago
Marie
so it's c?
14 years ago
Ms. Sue
I also like C, because it's efficient and short.
14 years ago
Writeacher
Right. A is wordy! C is better.
14 years ago

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