Question
What is the best way to revise this sentence " Make your decisions about what features are important to you."
A. Make decisions about what features are important to you.
C. Decide what features are important to you.
A. Make decisions about what features are important to you.
C. Decide what features are important to you.
Answers
Writeacher
C seems closer to the meaning of the original.
Marie
so it's c?
Ms. Sue
I also like C, because it's efficient and short.
Writeacher
Right. A is wordy! C is better.