How does this sound as a restaurant review?

Mi familia comimos en ese restaurante ayer. En ese restaurante Modern Apizza siempre serve pizza. Se hacen con al horno de ladrillo. Pides pizza, bebidas, ensaladas, y el pan. Pedimos ensalada de antipasto grande, de el pan, mucha grande pizza de queso mozzarella.Bebimos agua de limon. Cuestan 20 dólares. Generalmente, pizza con ingredientes cuestan 16-25 dólares. Ensaladas cuestan 3-6 dólares. Sólo cuestan 18 centavos de dólar de el pan. El camarero siempre nosotros sirve en seguida. Te gustaría mucho. La mejor pizza en New Haven es Modern Apizza!

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Mi familia, like in English is a collective noun and therefore singular = comemos (we do eat) or comimos (we did eat)

Some -ir verbs change the stem from e to i in the Present Tense and servir is one of them = sirve

IT is made, not they are made = se hace en el (or un) horno...

Pides = YOU ask for? Why not "Uno pide" = one asks for

Pedir you have in the Preterit but the rest is in the Present = Pedimos....not de el pan but el pam, una pizza muy grande

Beber is an -er verb & in the Present = bebemos...limón (don't forget the accent)

pizza is singular (subject) so the verb is also = cuesta...

Las ensaladas (unmodified noun needs article)

If bread is the subject = Sólo cuesta 18 centavos el pan OR El pan sólo cuesta 18 centavos.

The word order is off = El camarero siempre nos sirve (not nosotros = WE but nos = US)

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¡Muchos gracias! You were very helpful!