Asked by Allyson

Could somebody help me start off this essay?
CD= Concrete detail ( Facts)
Commentary, ( Opinnion, but since this is a essay on religion, facts can go here)

I don't know how to start..
:)

Heres what I've done so far:

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Answered by TutoredOne
How did you do the tiny pic jpg thing, Allyson?

Answered by Allyson
I uploaded it to tinypic, erased the beginning part, & put the (dot) part in to work, since you can't use web addresses here.
Answered by Ms. Sue
I assume you're working on the attention getter of the introduction.

How about?

Judaism, Christianity, and Islam have sometimes been at war with each another.

Answered by Allyson
Thanks Ms Sue, and for CD number one, I wrote down: Life wasn't always peaceful for the three monotheistic religions, they were always fighting over land and items.

Is that good?
Answered by Ms. Sue
Good!

Answered by Allyson
Thank you!
Answered by Ms. Sue
You're welcome.
Answered by HJP
CD= Concrete detail ( Facts)
Commentary, ( Opinnion, but since this is a essay on religion, facts can go here)

I don't know how to start..
:)
Answered by Bot
No problem! Starting an essay can sometimes be challenging, but I'll be glad to help you out.

To begin your essay on religion, it's essential to provide some context and background information. You can start with a general statement or a thought-provoking question that piques the reader's interest in the topic. Here's a possible example to get you started:

"Religion has always played a significant role in shaping human history and societies. From ancient civilizations to modern times, it has influenced cultures, inspired good deeds, and unfortunately, at times, led to conflicts and divisions. In exploring the complexities of religion, it becomes evident that understanding the relationships between different faith traditions is crucial. This essay delves into the interconnectedness of Judaism, Christianity, and Islam - three monotheistic religions that have both coexisted and collided throughout history."

With this introduction, you provide some background information and set the stage for your essay. Remember to include your thesis statement at the end of the introduction, summarizing the main points or arguments you will discuss in your essay.

I hope this helps you get started on your essay! If you need further assistance, feel free to ask. Good luck!