Question

is it correct English to say that the birthday cake you gave to me it always pop on my mind
and the way you Cared for me yet l am the older

Answer 1

Not quite — it needs a few grammar fixes. Main points:
- Use "gave me" (not "gave to me").
- Use "pops into my mind" or "comes to mind" (not "pop on my mind").
- Don't capitalize "cared" and write "I" (not "l").
- Use "even though I am older" (or "even though I'm older than you" if that’s what you mean).

Corrected versions (choose the one that matches your meaning):

- Neutral: "The birthday cake you gave me always pops into my mind, and so does the way you cared for me, even though I am older now."
- More natural: "I still think about the birthday cake you gave me and how you cared for me, even though I'm older now."
- If you mean older than the other person: "I still think about the birthday cake you gave me and how you cared for me, even though I'm older than you."

Pick whichever fits your intended meaning.