I am writing an argument paper on school uniforms and I had prepare an outline. Let me know what needs work. Thanks!

I. School uniforms should be required in all public schools because not only do they cut down on the teasing and bullying but they also help students have a better focus on school, and save parents money on clothes.

II. Requiring students to wear school uniforms will reduce the amount of teasing and bullying and is done often done in school today.

III. School uniforms will force students to pay less attention to their looks and pay more attention to their studies.

IV. Uniforms will keep parents from spending a fortune on back to school clothes.

V. In summary, school uniforms should be a must in all public school because they cut down on teasing, helps students focus more on their education, and save their parents money.

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I. School uniforms should be required in all public schools because, not only do they cut down on the teasing and bullying, but they also help students have a better focus on school, and save parents money on clothes.

II. Requiring students to wear school uniforms reduces the amount of teasing and bullying often done in school today.

III. Dressing in school uniforms will enable students to pay less attention to their looks and more attention to their studies.

IV. Uniforms will keep parents from spending a fortune on school clothes.

V. In summary, school uniforms should be a must in all public school because they cut down on teasing, help students focus more on their education, and save their parents money.