The most effective additional detail to add to paragraph 3 would be: “It shouldn’t be that difficult to respect one’s neighbors and not wake them up at all hours of the night,” said resident Gabrielle Tafoya.
This response adds a personal perspective that emphasizes the community aspect of the issue while reinforcing the idea that being considerate of neighbors is important. It aligns well with the supporters’ claims about the need for a peaceful environment and could help to underscore the arguments in favor of the noise ordinance.