Question

1) Their kindness will give me the gift of patience...


does this sound okay?

2)In this method, I could learn from different areas of study and eventually narrow my path and focus on a certain aspect of the field with pure confidence.

Too many ands?

Answer 1

1. This sounds fine.

2. Too many ands? Try to cut some out, if possible:

In this method, I could learn from different aread of study in o rder to eventually narrow my path and focus, etc.

Sra